Quills & Ink
Reviews For Danni on Imedhuir
Reviewer: Rhapsody (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 - 11:35 am · On: Beyond the Rainbow

OMG Elentari, for D&D players like me this oughta have a beverage alert:

 See? Regency speech, D&D makeup and wardrobe. Where the hell where the Survivor! cameras? 

Horrible and Handsome being Erestor. I loved it, the dialogue, the balancing on the edge of  hungry insanity... please more?



Author's Response:

More coming up. I finally found my muse again -- she was playing hide and seek at class break, can you believe it???

As a former RPG player, the D&D comment had me laughing, too. Enjoy!

Reviewer: trekqueen (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 - 10:51 am · On: Beyond the Rainbow

Erestor is such a cutie and badass. I can't wait to see where this is going! More soon please! I wonder how Danni is going to get along in Imedhuir once she learns a bit more about her new home. :D

Author's Response: To tell you the truth, even I wonder how she'll do. But you're right, erestor is Teh Elf. i just lurv him to bits. I'm glad you're still tuned and still enjoying!

Reviewer: trekqueen (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 - 10:43 am · On: Beyond the Rainbow

hahaha that was classic with Annatar being his usual self but oh so sexy while doing it! Poor Danni so confused! I can't believe I hadn't read chapter three yet, where the heck was I??? :O

Author's Response: Thanks! I cracked myself up with that scene. danni is, in her own words, going loney tunes. And i have no earthly idea where you were... you did notice chapter 4, right?

Reviewer: Rhapsody (Signed) · Date: 15/07/07 - 11:15 am · On: Beyond the Rainbow

Wah!!! This was such a delightful twist, teheee! What an introduction *grin*. I would have been speechless as well if an Adonis like that with such beautiful eyes would throw me on the bed. I so love this, more?

Author's Response: Isn't it? I got back to the time where Andreth lent me her golden boy. I had such terrific fun with him that I decided he'd make a guest appearance. Hell of a way to start your new life, huh?

Reviewer: Andreth (Signed) · Date: 14/07/07 - 01:29 am · On: Beyond the Rainbow

I absofuckinglutely love it! ;-D The conversational style of your writing in this is just fabulous. Really. Makes me feel like someone's just kicked back on a couch, telling me their story. I really, really enjoy stories written in such a laid-back tone. More! More! More!

Author's Response: I wanted to experiment with that style -- almost but not quite first person. It's different from my usual work and it's being surprisingly easy to do. Not to mention fun. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: trekqueen (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 03:31 pm · On: Beyond the Rainbow

heh I love her attempt to make herself not panic but still having every thought running through a mile a minute. ^_^ Wonder who is pinching her bum!

Author's Response: Well, it *is* a very strange situation... I gave her the response a gal from a crime-infested area would have. As for her bum, we get to see the rake in just a while. Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Rhapsody (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 02:06 pm · On: Beyond the Rainbow

Wow sharp observations with a lovely tie-in to Alice in Wonderland. It feels very appropiate somehow. Just her stunned reaction to the village and Thranduil groping her from behind... hmmm you tease!!

Author's Response: hahahaha.... yes, I'm a tease. can't help it. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: Rhapsody (Signed) · Date: 13/06/07 - 06:00 am · On: Beyond the Rainbow

Whah! What a hectic life, I really like how you gave Danni such a strong (rambling and hurried) voice in this chapter. I often thought: woman, now just sit down! And off she goes in the strong arms of that 6"2 elf Hmmmmm!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really wanted to show just how overwhelmed Danni was on Earth. I hope you like the rest of it just as much.

Reviewer: trekqueen (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 - 09:00 pm · On: Beyond the Rainbow

OOooh I wonder if the big strong gorgeous man is someone from somewhere else... hehe! I already like Danni, poor girl needs a break so hopefully this will help her out. The fact you managed to get Squee in the story just made me laugh out loud but it fit perfectly into your writing style: while doing her job it was terse and on point as she was but drunk, she was just loopy and silly. :D Great job!

Author's Response: Don't tell her, but the squee is actually an ode to wenont. I thought I talked like a character - my dad's always bothering me to stop saying 'oops', but whenever she said 'eep' during our carnival trip I just wanted to lay down and laught till I couldn't breathe. Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy the rest!

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