Quills & Ink ::

Reviewer: Keek (Signed) · Date: 22/02/06 - 05:51 pm · On: Chapter 1

Captivating, well done, and interesting. I like those three things in a fic, and you managed to do all three wonderfully. Can't wait for more like this. Keek

Reviewer: Elentari (Signed) · Date: 22/02/06 - 05:19 pm · On: Chapter 1

Nice tale telling. I recognise the beginning of it, and the chase, but not the rest - still, it's an interesting tale, unaffected and easy, and I was reading the end before I knew I was hooked. Good narrative, flow, and characterizations - the characters have individual personalities well defined in spite of the fic being short. The one thing I found distracting, and bed you won't be cross with me, is that the names were complicated. Is it matching the fandom universe? If so, I take my words back. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it a lot.

Reviewer: Wenont (Signed) · Date: 22/02/06 - 01:37 pm · On: Chapter 1

This was a wonderful story and brings to mind the method of storytelling that I grew to know as a child. I had learned to envison myself within the tale itself, when told by a skilled weaver of words, such as you ahve done. Ancient Greek and Roman teller of tales were apt to do such, as were, and are several native elders of mine. You tell a living tale here and I commend you on your ablility to rekindle the art of well told myths. Brava.

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